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Tuesday 1 November 2016

Camp Raglan


CAMP RAGLAN

One windy day we went out to camp Raglan everybody and I mean everybody was wearing beanies and gloves. We finally reached there and Me, Kirsten,Kate,Sakshi & Biqi went to have a look at our Rooms and had a little bit of play time then we started to begin the games. We started with archery and that was fun then we went over. It was dark so we had our food and went to our Rooms to sleep and then suddenly heard a voice sound from outside but we weren't Allowed to go outside til daytime but I did also want to go toilet so I went with my friend Kate out in the dark kate said that I am scared and then when I went in the toilet she was waiting for me outside, she heard a voice and screamed and told me to hurry up!!! I am getting scared out here then I went out then we both went back together to the Room. She asked me did you hear that voice and she said well I did you? I was like yes I did. I really do want to discover it but I can’t because it is dark and when did you hear it? I just did when you went to the toilet she said well I said do you want to discover it tomorrow just us together on about 6:00, do you? She said yes let's do it. Okey, let's go back to the room and take a rest (sleep)  okay sure and Ohh yes we can’t tell anyone this happened even Kirsten, Sakshi & Biqi kk, kk she said okay Goodnight again and she said goodnight and we slept. In the morning we had breakfast and continued with the activities and 10:00 we did swimming that was fun we also did jogging races and that was so fun then me and kate secretly went without anyone noticing we went to the area we heard that voice and then we saw who it was it was the chef he secretly came and made little voices just to scare the children but we said to stop because we know who it is so ya but know one never knew but us. Oh no, look out.
To Be continued...
By the way this is narrative     

2 comments:

  1. Hi,Ridhisri
    I liked you story I thought that it was very good and it sounds like fun.I like the way you described what every one was wearing it must of had been real funny.But I think you could do better.

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  2. Thankyou but that was narrative writting so we get to do what ever we want so I did that
    but thanks

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