In Room 8 we had to choose a picture and wrote about it like if your in their shoes and I chose this girl running in the rain so I wanted to write about about it so I did and I hope you read it and give me some Comments and any other posts below.
Hello Ridhi, I am sitting right next to you. I love your descriptive writing. I like how you put adjectives and verbs.Maybe next time you could double check because some parts don't make sense other than that it was good. Keep it up Kirsten
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Hello Ridhi,
ReplyDeleteI am sitting right next to you. I love your descriptive writing. I like how you put adjectives and verbs.Maybe next time you could double check because some parts don't make sense other than that it was good. Keep it up
Kirsten
Please check out my blog,
pcskirstenj.blogspot.co.nz
Thank you so much for your comment I really like it and I will double check it bye
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